The piece I chose for “Effective Sentences” is my Major Writing Assignment # 2, which is a definition essay, entitled “What is Education?” I made this essay during the sixth week of class. I picked this piece because I used a variety of sentence patterns to improve my grammar skills, organize my ideas, and enhance my sentence structures. This essay has good revision, strong focus towards the subject and good comparative ideas because I revised each error carefully, I organized the information, and I gave different perceptions of education from wealthy compared to poor countries. I also made a good integration of my essay with Greg Mortensons’ Three Cups of Tea which has the same idea to my essay.
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